This is an extravaganza of rythmic rhyme and clipped incision!
I think most self respecting poets that live in the word may identify with this one…
Of course it very definitely has to be read – preferably from main stage at a large pop festival!
“Hit your #critics with incision before they hit you with derision!” (Just tweeted)
jm
The Link comes from the site:
Alice’s Adventures in New York City
Posted in: Poetry, Social Commentary
johndwmacdonald 
alicebradley
October 28, 2012
Thank you so much for the link! I appreciate it so much, and your praise is incredibly flattering!
johndwm
October 28, 2012
I love this sort of poetry and it is very skillfully wraught. We used to do high energy poetry in the Trubadeaur in Earls Court London in the late seventies early eightieds. I read one at the Windsor Park festival the police broke up in ’75 from the main stage. It was a poem about an egg – long lost! Someone in the audience gave me an egg afterwards! A recorded reading would be good – preferably from the main stage!
johndwm
October 28, 2012
The following sites have ‘liked’ it so far:
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Cheers – Enjoy Wonderland!